Arrived

Great stuff man, your new work is pulling together, carrying a much more cohesive feeling of story, that there is something going on before and after this frame.
The atmosphere is great, but with that, things look a little too crisp in places, breaking the mist. The outline of the ship is one, it looks vector crisp. I'm no master at this stuff, just that it feels a bit layered or cutout to me.
The geometry of the soldier is lit well, but it's some of those shapes that feel to simple. Like where the shoulder plates meet the chest plate. The pouches look rushed, flesh em out a bit.
Lastly, secondary lights, there are none. For a dim lit piece like this, they can do a lot. That dropship needs to have something going on, like bay lights. The lighting isn't boring here, it's just logical that something out there has a light on.

This is me having to nitpick at you, I couldn't find any deal breaker flaws. Keep on truckin.